Animatic For Script

here is the link to the youtube better qualtiy verson:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qiIr36haBkM
Here is my animatic for my scritp, overall my happy with it the outcome of the story but im disappointed that I didn’t spend enough time on drawing the panels, I would have liked to add more detail to the backgrounds of the scene and also would have liked to ink in the final produce to make it look more professional.